http://masadaweb.org/2008/05/10/1139/ Periodico di lotta e poesia Mon, 06 Feb 2012 17:01:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://masadaweb.org/2008/05/10/1139/#comment-4731 Fri, 06 May 2011 14:55:25 +0000 http://masadaweb.org/2008/05/10/1139/#comment-4731 The heart of your writing while sounding agreeable originally, did not really work well with me after some time. Someplace within the sentences you were able to make me a believer unfortunately just for a while. I however have a problem with your jumps in logic and one would do nicely to fill in those breaks. When you can accomplish that, I will surely end up being amazed.

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